A colon list introduction in the stage cupboard

Leena and Farid are preparing a small play in her front room. This complete story is original fiction; its people and evening are invented.

A complete clause before the list

Purdue OWL places a colon introducing a list after an independent clause. For this colon list introduction, I kept the props and supplied a complete clause.

Draft: “Leena packed: a scarf, a paper crown and a blue cup.” Retained: “Leena packed three props: a scarf, a paper crown and a blue cup.”

The stage cupboard

Leena packed three props: a scarf, a paper crown and a blue cup.

She put them in a shallow cardboard box beside the cupboard. Farid looked into it, then at the stage cupboard she had emptied. He asked whether that was everything. Leena said it was everything they had agreed on. They had agreed on nothing about the crown, but she hoped the scarf and cup would make the answer seem less particular.

The cupboard stood in the corner of her front room, behind the chair with the green cushion. It held the remains of several evenings when somebody had suggested putting on a play. A rolled sheet of paper claimed to be a telescope. There was a glove with no partner, a velvet bag full of buttons and a painted stone she could not remember anyone carrying onto a stage.

There had never been a stage. They moved the chairs toward the window and left a space beside the cupboard. The first time, her father had called that space the palace, and afterward every play seemed to contain a palace whether the story needed one or not. Leena had once written a scene in a railway waiting room. Someone brought in the crown before she could explain.

Farid took it out of the box. The paper had softened along the fold at the back, where a piece of old tape held the ends together. He turned it in his hands without putting it on. Leena watched him through the opening between the cupboard door and the frame. She was pretending to look for something on the bottom shelf.

“You can have a different part,” she said. He asked different from what. She said she had thought he might want to be the king. He looked at the crown as though it might have applied for the position on his behalf. “I was the king last time,” he said. “And the time before.” Leena found the painted stone and put it back.

Her father had always worn the crown. When he stopped coming to these evenings, Farid had taken the part because somebody needed to read it. Leena had thanked him while everyone was putting their coats on, and he had said it was nothing. She had believed that he meant the part was nothing, a small thing he could keep doing without another conversation.

Now he held it above the box, waiting for her to tell him where else it could go. She said the shelf would do. He laid it there with the points facing the room. The cardboard box contained a scarf and a cup. Leena nearly asked what sort of play they could make with those, then remembered that neither had asked her to write a king.

The pages lay on the table beside the window. She had typed them that morning and made a few changes by hand. Farid went over to read the first one. Leena remained by the cupboard until he asked where the sea was meant to be. She had written that the characters were waiting for a boat. The palace had been there in an earlier version.

She pointed to the window. Farid looked through it at the opposite building. A man was shaking a small rug over his balcony. “Busy sea,” he said. Leena said they would have to imagine farther away. Farid lifted the paper telescope from the cupboard and looked through it. The man across the street disappeared behind the cardboard, leaving a very small section of wall.

“That's worse,” he said. He lowered the telescope and put it on the table. Leena began laughing, which made it easier to admit that she had not decided what the boat would bring. She had reached that point in the story and written a line about the tide. She did not know anything useful about tides. In this room the boat could arrive whenever they chose.

Farid read the line she had written for the king. “I have waited long enough.” He said it in his ordinary voice, looking at the page instead of the window. Leena heard the sentence as a complaint about the afternoon. She told him he did not have to stay. He looked up and tapped the paper. “It's the line,” he said.

She came to the table and read over his shoulder. Beneath the king's words she had left a space for a reply. Nothing had seemed suitable that morning. Farid pulled out the other chair. Leena sat down, moving the blue cup so that it would not stand on the corner of the page. From there she could see the crown on its shelf, apparently waiting for someone with a better claim.

Farid chooses a voice

“Could I be the person who doesn't know?” he asked. Leena wanted to know what the person did not know. Farid said anything. When the king asked where the boat was, this person could say they had not seen it. When someone asked what was in the cup, they could look inside. He picked it up and did so, with more attention than an empty cup usually received.

Leena said there was no such part in the pages. Farid nodded. She read the king's line again. It sounded different when nobody was wearing the crown. She drew a short mark through the name above it and wrote TRAVELLER in the margin. Farid watched her pencil. “That could be you,” he said. She told him she had been hoping not to play anyone important.

He said a traveller waiting for a boat did not have to be important. There might be another traveller waiting nearby. Leena looked at the blank space beneath the line. “Perhaps I haven't waited at all,” she said. Farid asked whether she had only just arrived. She nodded, and he told her that would explain why she still believed a boat was coming.

They stayed at the table while the light shifted across the pages. Leena wrote the new reply, then crossed out a longer sentence she had been saving for the king. Farid asked her to read it before she covered it completely. She did, in a grand voice that made the sentence sound as though it had brought its own furniture. They agreed to leave it crossed out.

The scarf lay across the edge of the box. Leena lifted it onto her shoulders while she read the traveller's lines. Farid watched one end trail against the chair. “Cold at sea,” he said. She told him they were still on shore. “Cold here too.” He looked toward the window, where the man had finished with the rug and gone inside.

Leena wrote COLD HERE TOO beneath the reply about the boat. She did not put a character's name above it yet. Farid asked if she wanted him to say it. She said she wanted to hear what it sounded like first. He stood beside the table with the cup and spoke it quietly, as if he were telling her something she could already feel.

It was better than the speech she had crossed out. Leena left the page on the table and went to move the chairs. Farid carried one toward the window, stopping when she pointed to the gap beside the cupboard. She wanted that space to stay clear. He set the chair down facing it, then moved it again so that another person could sit beside him.

The crown remained on the shelf. Leena could have put it back in the box and closed the lid. Instead she took it down and brought it to the table. She placed it beside the pages, where it looked less like a decision already made. Farid glanced at it and returned to the line he was reading. She did not ask him to try it on.

“We might need it another evening,” she said. He agreed. That was all. She put it in the cupboard, above the painted stone. The shelf had an empty patch where the scarf had been, and a clean round mark showed where the cup usually stood. Leena left both spaces visible while she searched for another pencil. Farid had tucked hers behind his ear without noticing.

She pointed to it. He felt behind the wrong ear first, then found it and held it out to her. She said he could keep it until they had finished. He added a small question beside one of his lines and showed her the page. She could not read his handwriting from where she stood. He moved the paper toward her instead of explaining what she ought to have seen.

When the doorbell rang, neither was ready. Leena had expected to be bothered by that. Farid put the pages in order while she went into the hall. Their friends arrived carrying coats, a packet of biscuits and a folded newspaper someone wanted to read aloud later. Leena took the coats and told them there was room by the window. Nobody asked whether the palace was finished.

Farid waited beside the cupboard with the cup in his hands. Leena brought the scarf from the table and stood a little way from him. Through the window she could see the empty balcony and the folded rug on its rail. She looked past it toward the sea they had agreed was there. Farid lifted the cup, looked inside once more and waited for her first line.

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Two neighbouring manuscript edits

The earlier separate-actions timing repair removes unintended simultaneity between two visits. This draft preserves the same packing event and the same props. It creates no different arrival, departure or meeting.

The earlier dangling modifier repair supplies the missing actor in an introductory clause. Leena is named in both versions here. This local list edit supplies no new actor and moves no description between objects.

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