Golden shovel poetry: write with borrowed line endings

Golden shovel poetry gives a chosen source line a new setting. You keep its words as the endings of newly written lines, acknowledging the writer whose language you borrow.

Begin with a conversation between poems

The Academy of American Poets describes this form as a conversation with an earlier text. A new poem can differ markedly in subject and tone while retaining that relationship. Start by reading the source as a poem you want to answer, remember or reconsider. The words at your line endings will remain connected to that reading.

You have room to write new surrounding language. Decide what you want to bring to the encounter: a changed perspective, a different scene or a question the earlier line leaves with you. Keep that intention tentative while you draft. Your response may change as the new lines develop, without erasing the source relationship or requiring you to imitate the earlier speaker. Read the source again when you return to the new draft, noticing which part of its language you still want to address.

Know the form's origin before borrowing

The Poetry Foundation credits Terrance Hayes with creating the Golden Shovel to honor writing he admired. His poem used words from Gwendolyn Brooks's “We Real Cool” as line endings. That origin gives the exercise a literary relationship to consider before you begin arranging words down a page. The borrowed language belongs to an existing work and writer.

Read about the form alongside the poems that introduced it when you want that context. This guide reproduces neither poem. A description of their relationship can help you recognize what you are trying, while the actual works offer the language and tone a short definition cannot supply. Keep your reading separate from any assumption that an online text is freely reusable.

You can choose another poet whose work matters to you. Retain the distinction between acknowledging the form's origin and identifying the particular poem you borrow from. Your draft needs its own source credit even when a reader already knows the story of Hayes and Brooks. Choose the source deliberately before preparing a clean copy. Keep both titles distinct in your working source notes.

Choose a striking line that means something to you

Peter Kahn's Young Poets Network workshop asks writers to look for a striking line. His advice favors a strong first word, such as a noun or verb, and leaves the new poem's subject open. Read possible lines for the language that attracts you. An unusual word may suggest a voice or an image you want to explore.

Bring the line back into its original poem before selecting it. Consider why it matters there and why you want to carry it elsewhere. You might respond to its subject, or write toward something different. Keep a brief note about your choice beside the source details so you can return to that reason when the draft becomes difficult.

Kahn presents several possibilities for borrowed material, including other kinds of writing. For this session, stay with a poetic line you have chosen and can appropriately use. His page also describes a challenge with a March 2019 deadline; that historical invitation is not an open submission opportunity. You can use the workshop's writing advice without entering any competition or contacting its organizers.

Keep acknowledgment with borrowed line endings

The Poets & Writers prompt asks for the source words in their original order and a note crediting the poet. Put that acknowledgment beside the working draft now. Include the poet and the poem you actually consulted, keeping the selected line available for comparison. This lets you trace the borrowing after several revisions.

Read your borrowed line endings back against the source when you copy the draft. A credit written from memory can attach the wrong poet to a line, even when the new poem's wording is otherwise unchanged. Check the source details you retained before preparing a version to show another reader.

Acknowledgment identifies the borrowing; it does not by itself settle permission to reproduce or publish another writer's language. Keep any relevant permission or reuse information with your notes and resolve that question before sharing in a setting that requires it. You can leave a draft private while deciding what use is appropriate. Preserve the source note when you save the selected version.

Draft inside your poetry notebook

Kris Kaila's Poetry Lab craft article suggests laying the selected words down the page and writing into them. In your poetry notebook, leave space before each ending for language you will compose. A sentence can run across a line break; reaching an anchor word need not force a full stop.

Write a line when you have something for it, even if it comes later in the developing poem. Kaila also suggests stepping away when you are stuck and returning to the work. Keep unfinished spaces visible while drafting. A word placed at the right edge is a starting scaffold, and the surrounding language still needs your attention.

Read a passage aloud to hear whether its sentences flow across the breaks you chose. If an ending feels forced, try changing the approach to it while retaining the selected anchor. The craft article allows a different theme from the source poem. Give your new language room to develop its own voice rather than repeatedly explaining what the borrowed line already says.

Revise the poem with a reader

Peter Kahn's Poetry Out Loud lesson plan separates drafting from peer editing. Its questions include whether the poem follows the form, makes sense and contains surprising word choices. Ask a willing reader to consider your actual draft with those questions. Let them describe what they understand before you explain what you intended.

Compare that reading with your own intention. A phrase you like may need more context, while a sentence you considered ordinary may carry an image clearly. Revise the language you want to improve, retaining the source line nearby so the borrowed endings remain identifiable. Save a version before making substantial changes if you want to compare the results.

The lesson also treats reading aloud and presentation as separate work. You can consider tone and pacing after you have a draft you want to keep. A quiet notebook session need not become a performance. Keep the reader’s comments with the draft. Choose whether another reading would help this poem, and keep the source acknowledgment with whichever version you select for a reader.

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Keep neighboring poetry forms on their own pages

The erasure poem prompt guide selects retained words from an original sentence while preserving their order. That activity removes material. Here, you compose new language around words taken from a source line and keep those words at successive line endings. Choose the page that fits the kind of writing you want to do.

The cento line attribution guide arranges complete borrowed lines and keeps their individual credits attached. A Golden Shovel uses the selected words as endings within newly written lines. Its source note remains necessary even though most surrounding language is your own. Keep the full-line arrangement separate if you want to try both activities.

These related pages offer different composition decisions, with their own examples and limits. You can return to your chosen project after reading them without combining every technique. Save the draft with its intended line breaks and acknowledgment, then decide whether you want another revision or a new writing session. Buying a different tool does not choose among these literary approaches.

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