Onomatopoeia in an original scene with a window shade

An invented visit keeps one shade sound and a plain wording alternative.

By Republeq Editorial · 11 min read · November 1, 2026

Onomatopoeia uses words that imitate a described sound. This original scene chooses “clack” for a fictional shade and preserves a plain description of the same event alongside it.

Bram, Nessa, the flat, the shade and their visit are invented. No actual sound was recorded or measured, and no retail product supplied the scene.

Before the knock

Bram was making a space for the bowl when he noticed the window shade. It hung above the sill at an angle he had stopped seeing during the week. Now that Nessa was coming, he found himself looking at it again. He moved a folded newspaper from the table and laid it across the seat of a chair.

She had sent a message saying she would return his bowl after lunch. He had replied that he would be home. There had been no invitation beyond that exchange, although he had bought a packet of biscuits on the way back from the shops. He put the packet beside the kettle and left its end unopened.

The bowl had gone to her flat with a batch of plums from his brother’s garden. Nessa had returned the empty paper bag a few days earlier. Bram remembered telling her there was no hurry about the bowl. He was pleased she was bringing it now because he wanted it for the oranges waiting in a colander.

He looked through the window before taking hold of the shade cord. The street below had acquired a different van since he last looked out. Somebody had left a small red bicycle against the railings. He could not tell whose it was. He watched a person pass it without stopping, then turned his attention back to the room.

He lowered the shade a little. Its rail touched the wooden trim.

The shade went clack.

Bram held the cord for another moment. From the hall came a knock, followed by Nessa calling his name through the door. He let the cord hang and went to answer her. She was balancing the bowl in its wrapping against one hip. The paper had opened at the top, showing the blue edge he recognised.

At the door

“I brought it back with its own paper,” she said. She held it out, then drew it toward herself again when Bram reached for the wrong side of the bundle. “Wait. There’s a little dish tucked inside.” He stepped aside so she could come through without having to pass the two pieces across the threshold.

The little dish was hers. She had put it inside because she was going to her sister’s later and had not brought another bag. Bram laughed at the doubled errand. Nessa lifted it out, set his bowl on the table and folded the wrapping around her own dish. She asked whether she could leave her bundle beside the door.

He put it on the chair where the newspaper had been. The newspaper went back onto the table, where he had originally found it. Nessa noticed the exchange and said she could keep the bundle on her lap if she was undoing his arrangements. He said the paper had already occupied three different places that morning.

She asked what he had been doing at the window. Bram glanced at the shade and said he had thought it looked crooked. Now it looked lower. Nessa stood beside the table while he looked at it from there. Neither of them moved toward the cord. He asked whether she had time for tea before taking her dish onward.

She said she had time for one cup. Her sister would not be home until later, and she had planned to walk by the river before going there. Bram took two mugs from the cupboard. Nessa asked him to leave hers on the table because she wanted to unwrap the little dish once more and check that its lid was with it.

It was. She had wrapped the lid beneath the dish and forgotten the order in which she had made the bundle. She set them together on the table, then folded the paper flat. Bram asked what her sister wanted the dish for. Nessa said she had left it there after a meal and was finally taking it back.

The returned bowl

Bram brought the oranges over in their colander. He tipped them into his bowl, keeping one hand beside its edge when an orange rolled toward the table. Nessa caught that one and put it on top of the others. He asked whether she wanted it for her walk. She said she would take it when she left.

They sat with the bowl between them. It was familiar enough that Bram rarely looked closely at the blue line around its rim. Nessa said she had enjoyed having it on her own table. He asked whether she had filled it with anything after the plums were gone. She said it had held two letters and the key she kept misplacing.

He had expected her to say fruit. She asked whether letters were forbidden. He said they were allowed, but he wanted the bowl’s first afternoon home to belong to oranges. Nessa moved her wrapped dish away from it, making a deliberately large space on the table. Bram put the biscuit packet into that space and finally opened it.

One biscuit had broken across the middle. Nessa chose the larger half and said that left him the smaller one and the excuse to take another. He took the smaller piece. For a while they talked about the shop where he had bought them, which had moved its counter so that he had walked past it before noticing.

Nessa had not been into the shop since the previous month. She asked where the counter was now. Bram began describing the doorway and discovered he had forgotten whether the tall shelf was still beside it. He left that detail undecided. She said she would find the counter if she went in, and he agreed that she probably would.

He could see the red bicycle through the uncovered part of the window. Somebody had turned it around while they were sitting there. He mentioned that, then realised he had not seen anyone touch it. He had only noticed its new position. Nessa looked out from her chair and asked which bicycle he meant.

Across the table

She had to stand to see it. Bram stayed seated while she moved to the window. She pointed to a different bicycle first, and he described the red one against the railings. By the time she found it, he was laughing at the amount of conversation required to identify an object neither of them needed to identify.

Nessa came back to the table without moving the shade. She had seen the bicycle through the gap beneath it. Bram asked whether the room had become too dark. She said she could see her tea and the remaining biscuits. He looked at the shade again, then returned to the broken biscuit crumb on his plate.

She told him about meeting her sister outside the wrong station entrance the previous week. They had both arrived early and both waited, each certain the other person was still on the train. Bram asked how long they had stood there. Nessa said she had not checked and would only be inventing a number now.

What she remembered was seeing her sister’s shopping bag before she saw her sister. They had both begun laughing from opposite sides of the station doors. Nessa had asked where she had been. Her sister had asked the same question. Bram said he could imagine the two bags appearing first, with their owners following behind them.

Nessa reached for her own little dish while telling him that part. She turned it in the paper and checked its lid again, although she had already found it. This time she put the lid above the dish so she would see it when she opened the bundle later. Bram passed her the loose end of the wrapping.

He offered more tea. She looked toward the window and said she still wanted the walk she had promised herself. Bram stood to take her mug. She said she could bring it to the kitchen, but he had already reached the table. He carried both mugs away and left the bowl of oranges where it was.

Leaving

When he returned, Nessa was putting the saved orange into her coat pocket. She showed him where it had gone so that he would not offer it to her again. He said he had been about to. She picked up the dish with both hands and waited while he checked the chair for anything hidden under the wrapping paper.

The chair held only the newspaper now. Bram folded it once more and put it on the shelf beneath the table. Nessa asked whether that was its final destination. He said it could stay there until he wanted to read the page he had folded inside. He had lost track of which page that was.

At the door she asked him to tell his brother the plums had been good. Bram said he would pass that on. She thanked him for the tea and went down the stairs carrying her own dish. He remained by the open door until she had reached the turn in the staircase, then called goodbye and closed it.

His bowl stood in the middle of the table. The biscuit packet was open beside it. Bram took the remaining half biscuit and sat in the chair Nessa had used. From that position he could see the red bicycle without standing. He ate the biscuit before looking at the window shade again.

He left it where it was. There was still enough light on the table for the blue rim of the bowl to show. The newspaper could wait on the shelf, and the oranges could remain piled as they had fallen. He reached for one, turned it in his hand and began lifting a small piece of peel.

The wording

Selected: “The shade went clack.” Plain alternative: “The shade made a short hard noise.” Here “clack” imitates the authored sound; the alternative describes it. These are two wordings of one fictional event.

The shade sound belongs to an invented visit.

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