A gift and an apology at a Christmas visit

Ilan had bought Mara's present before he showed her drawing to Gita. By the time he arrived at her door, the parcel had become awkward to carry. It was a small box, light enough to hold under one arm, wrapped in brown paper with red string. He had imagined setting it beside her chair during the Christmas visit. Now he was trying to work out where a gift and an apology could fit in the same room. This is an original fictional story; its people, sketchbook and conversation are invented.

Before the Christmas visit

Three evenings earlier, Mara had left her sketchbook at Ilan's flat after they had eaten together. Before leaving, she had closed it and said she did not want him showing the pages to anyone. He remembered the request clearly. The next morning, when Gita came round, he opened the book at a drawing of a narrow staircase. Gita had asked what Mara was working on. He had answered by turning the sketchbook toward her.

Later that day he told Mara he had shown Gita the staircase drawing. He had expected to explain why he liked it. Mara asked him why he had opened the book after what she had said. He began describing Gita's interest, then stopped. The question concerned his decision. He said he would bring the sketchbook back at Christmas, as they had already arranged. Mara said she wanted it back. She did not say anything about the present.

At home, Ilan left the wrapped box on the kitchen counter. The string had slipped toward one corner, so he straightened it. He nearly wrote a longer message on the tag, then put the pen down. He had bought the gift because he had seen it weeks earlier and thought of Mara. He could still remember the ordinary pleasure of choosing it. He could also remember lifting the sketchbook cover when Gita asked her question.

The wrapped box stays closed

Mara opened the door wearing a thick cardigan. Behind her, a lamp was on beside the armchair, and a few Christmas lights glowed at the window. Ilan held up the sketchbook first. She took it by the spine, checked the cover and placed it on the low table. Then she looked at the parcel under his arm. He said he had brought her present. She stepped aside to let him enter.

He put the box near the table's edge and kept his coat on until she pointed to the hooks in the hall. That small practical instruction gave him something to do. When he came back, Mara was sitting in the armchair. He sat opposite her. The sketchbook lay closed between them. The present was close enough for either person to reach, but neither touched the string.

“Did you show her any other pages?” Mara asked. Ilan had prepared a sentence about how much he admired her work. He could hear its opening in his head. Instead he answered the question. He said that he had shown Gita the staircase drawing and no other page. Mara asked whether he had taken a photograph. He said he had not. He kept his hands resting on his knees while she looked at him.

Naming the unresolved disagreement

“I showed your drawing without asking. I am sorry,” Ilan said. He had spoken quietly enough that he wondered whether he should repeat it. Mara had heard him. She asked why he had done it when she had specifically asked him not to. He said he had wanted to show Gita the staircase, and that he had opened the book despite remembering her request. He did not describe Gita's opinion of the drawing.

Mara leaned forward and rested one hand on the sketchbook. “You told me you understood,” she said. He remembered saying that too. For a moment he looked toward the window, where one of the lights was reflected twice in the glass. He brought his eyes back to her. “I did understand what you asked,” he said. “I went ahead anyway.” Mara left her hand on the cover.

Their unresolved disagreement concerned a request he remembered and a page he had chosen to show. Ilan could answer questions about those things. He could not tell Mara what she would think of his answers. He had no further page to return and no photograph to delete. The sketchbook was already on her table, but the conversation had not reached an ending.

A present chosen earlier

Mara glanced at the box. Ilan said he had chosen it before the sketchbook incident. As soon as he said it, he worried that he sounded as though he were offering a receipt for an earlier version of himself. He added only that he had meant to bring it for Christmas. Mara looked back at him. “I haven't decided whether I want to open it today,” she said.

“You don't have to,” he answered. The parcel stayed where it was. Ilan did not know what Mara would decide about it later. He moved his empty cup away from the sketchbook so there was more room on the table. Mara lifted the book onto her lap. He could see the red string against the brown wrapping, with one loose end lying across the top of the box.

He had brought a gift he wanted her to have. He had also done something she had asked him not to do. Sitting opposite her, he could feel himself wanting to join those facts into a neater account of the visit. Mara had asked about the drawing. The present could stay beside the lamp while he remained with that question. He left the contents of the parcel unannounced.

Mara had brought two cups from the kitchen before they sat down. One was hers, chipped at the handle, and the other was the plain blue cup she usually gave visitors. Ilan had noticed it when he arrived and felt briefly relieved. Now the cup was empty, and he could hear how quickly he had made something out of that small familiar detail. Mara had offered him a drink. She was still asking him about the sketchbook.

He looked at the parcel again without reaching for it. Under the wrapping was the gift he had chosen weeks before, but describing it now would interrupt the question still between them. Mara adjusted the sketchbook on her lap and traced the edge of its cover with her thumb. Ilan remembered seeing her do that while deciding where to begin a drawing. This time he had no page to watch. He waited for her to speak.

One more question

“What exactly did you say when she asked whose drawing it was?” Mara asked. Ilan thought back to the morning in his flat. He remembered Gita standing beside the kitchen chair, her scarf still around her neck. He told Mara he had said that she had drawn it. Then he paused. He had also said she did not usually let people see work in progress. He told her that part too.

Mara pressed her lips together and looked down at the cover. Ilan waited. Outside, a car passed slowly enough for its headlights to travel along the curtain. The lights at the window stayed on. He did not know whether Mara would ask another question or ask him to leave. When she looked up, the sketchbook was still closed on her lap and the parcel was still wrapped on the table.

Two catalogue accounts outside the story

The silver wrapping-paper account offers a separate catalogue example. Its sole selected variant says Silver Geometric, matching the pictured reflective geometric roll. The title and description use “solid color,” while the title's 32.8-foot length conflicts with the variant's 100-foot size. The silver wrapping-paper listing therefore does not establish a plain finish or delivered length. No wrapping material in Ilan's fictional parcel is identified as this offer.

The IDL paper-roll account shows a brown roll with an IDL Packaging label, including an 18-inch width, “#30” and a 1,200-foot length. Those visible statements do not authenticate composition or delivered contents. The IDL kraft-paper listing describes both virgin pulps and recycled material, leaving that composition claim unresolved. Its pictured roll is separate from the invented present. Neither catalogue account verifies maker, dimensions, delivered quantity or tear resistance through an actual product test.

Related fictional gift writing

The bookend gift-note guide considers a different authored situation: a private note connecting a decorative motif with an attributed reading memory. Its note-making purpose does not supply Ilan's words or explain Mara's response here. Readers interested in that quieter gift-message exercise can follow it as separate related reading, while leaving this story's sketchbook conversation open.

The released drawing-gift promise story follows another distinct decision, when a recipient releases a promised drawing gift and its maker continues private work. Mara has not released a promise in this story, and Ilan's present is already wrapped. Their conversation concerns his completed action with her sketchbook. The two fictional situations remain separate, with their own characters and outcomes.

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